Wednesday, November 11, 2009
Perspective Acitivity
"I can't wait for this awesome ride," I said to my friend as we waited for a new ride at six flags. What ever he said back I did not comprehend because I was getting very impatient at the sluggish line. I was getting very fidgety and upset. the people behind us said something inaudible. I said to my friend "I am going to be so stoked when we get on this ride." And then my aniexty continued until we got on the ride and then my impenitentness was replaced with overwhelming joy.
Third Person Limited:
"Man that kid in front of us is so twitchy" the guy said to his buddy. The kid was indede fidgeting and being very impatient. That kid soon was screaming his head off when he got the ride.
Third Person Omniscient:
The was so jubilant about the new ride at six flags. But he had to overcome the dawdling line before he expierenced the mind blowing power of the ride. the kid was so impatient that he was bounceing of the walls until he finally got to the ride.
First Person:
"God I hate Atlanta" I said as I was sitting in afternoon trafic. I wanted to pull out my gat and start busting caps in them bitches
Tuesday, October 6, 2009
Metamorphois 3
Wednesday, September 30, 2009
Metamorphosis 2
Metamorphosis 1
Well, I guess I will start telling this story from that fateful night last week. I was walking through New York City on a overcast night. It was late, but everyone seemed more awake than ever. Lights dimly lit up the night and signs flashed. I could hear horns blaring everywhere I turned. I could see the stars faintly twinkling and the moon barely visible through the clouds. I walked on sniffing the popcorn vendor on the corner and the skyscrapers reached up farther than the eye could see. In the distance, proud and tall stood the Statue of Liberty. I was on my home from work when I decided to take a shortcut to my crappy loft. I turned to the right down the alley. I was walking past an overfull dumpster when it suddenly got very gloomy and cold. I looked behind me and thought I saw a shadowy figure at the end of the alley, but I just brushed it off as my eyes playing tricks on me. I turned back around and let out a scream of pure terror because in my face was a woman with blood red eyes. I jumped back a step and examined the the girl. She was wearing a pitch black trench coat with a dirty white shirt and torn up jeans. There was cuts and dirt on her face, but she was remarkably beautiful; she had long crimson hair and and she was slightly pale. I thought she was just a average thief. I assumed she had a gun or a knife, so I said "look i don't have much money, but you can take what...." my statement was cut off short. The next thing I know I am flying through the air until my back hits a conceret wall. She moved with blinding speed I did not even see her swing, but I knew that she did it. I was dazed and I could barely comprehend her walking very slowly up to me; she had a stunning smile. She bent over my crumpled body and said in a harmonious voice "I'm so sorry." I could then feel her warm breath on my neck. I could scarcely feel her teeth before I blacked out.